The Red Lands Chapter 30

Feedback, Feedback Readers!

As this tale slowly begins to unravel, It would be nice to gain some sort of feedback. Please use the comments to add some thoughts.

To the readers considerate to add Likes and become Followers of this web novel.

Thank you very much for taking time to do this after reading. I am very appreciative of this feedback. It at least shows the story continues to grow on people.

This is a Blog for sharing stories and short novels. Feel free to post your links in the comment section and a short reason as to why you think its great.

Readers are after all the lifeblood of Writers.

How is a writer supposed to know if somebody is reading his work?

Don’t sell yourself short people.

P.S. I’m very fragile so don’t break me with some overly harsh commenting. 🙂

Disaster

6 thoughts on “The Red Lands Chapter 30

  1. Don’t mind royaroads complaints about false tags: 2 of 3 tags are already reveling them here.
    Most of complaints there would have not been voiced if they had not been so lazy to manually delete obviously wrong part of link leading here to extra chapters. And story pace is good for a book, but slow compared to average royalroad standards.
    Where each 3rd story have 1 meter long baby that can barely walk, still poop in pants and slay dragon at chapter 5 and story gets abandoned before chapter 20.

  2. Don’t mind royaroads complaints about false tags: 2 of 3 tags are already reveling them here.
    Most of complaints there would have not been voiced if they had not been so lazy to manually delete obviously wrong part of link leading here to extra chapters. And story pace is good for a book, but slow compared to average royalroad standards.
    Where each 3rd story have 1 meter long baby that can barely walk, still poop in pants and slay dragon at chapter 5 and story gets abandoned before chapter 20.

  3. Waiting on chappy 31!! I need my hit man, I’m already getting shivers!

    In seriousness, saw your novel on RRL; it hooked me instantly. It’s slow moving but getting better every chapter. Don’t worry about the reviewers complaining about your tags. You obviously have plans for your story and simply haven’t gotten to the parts of the story with those specific tags. Some parts of your writing could obviously use work, and you’re already taking steps to get better by writing this book. I hope you keep at it and know you’ve got a fan.

    I’ve been checking this site everyday for next chapter. Can you inform us about your release schedule?

  4. Waiting on chappy 31!! I need my hit man, I’m already getting shivers!

    In seriousness, saw your novel on RRL; it hooked me instantly. It’s slow moving but getting better every chapter. Don’t worry about the reviewers complaining about your tags. You obviously have plans for your story and simply haven’t gotten to the parts of the story with those specific tags. Some parts of your writing could obviously use work, and you’re already taking steps to get better by writing this book. I hope you keep at it and know you’ve got a fan.

    I’ve been checking this site everyday for next chapter. Can you inform us about your release schedule?

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